Tuesday, May 02, 2006

In The Stillness

Sitting silent; pondering my day; contemplating life's miracles; of a genre I cannot say; Waiting, wondering, not knowing what secrets lie ahead; the vast plain that is in front of me; in which I am blindly led; My steps, cautiously bold; knowing, trusting who's there; putting faith in guidance; hoping enough to dare; Leaps, bounds; and suddenly a splash; a new terrane; has now crossed my path; Its cold, wet; emersing my ever being; weeding out my fear; all without me ever seeing; The ground drops; my heart pounds; I am held up; carried through the mounds; Will i give up?; am i strong enough to let go?; my whole being shlumps; my sadness is something only one knows; He sits me up; holds me near; whispering sweet dreams; that drive out the fear

Comments:
This is one of those pieces that can be taken in a hundred different ways, which I love this style because it speaks differently to every, single reader. I can't help but wonder where you're rooting it from Dawn, but either way, it sure is incredible once we give our fears to God, whatever they may be and feel nothing but peace.
 
hmmm fear yeah I see...fear and control when I read this...I see giving it up...but in my situation I see me giving it up and then grabbing it and holding onto it so hard that my hands have marks from it...and I see me crawling and Him picking me up saying that I dont have to...yeah sorry went into my own world for a sec thats jsut what I see.
 
it's a good one. like i told josh, you guys all write wonderful! i think i'm jealous.
 
No need to be jealous Jello. Everyone expresses diffrently. I know I certainly do. Tis why I don't post on poem, or lyrical blogs often. They are usualy beautiful, but I don't for the most part relate in that way.
 
Yeah, Scott's a ninja, he's needs ninja stuff to relate to.

Jello, you've got things that we don't so there's no need to be jelous. You've got crazy roofing skillz!
 
If I smell like grilled Cheese, you smell like Vanilla Peppercorns....




...Don't ask...for your own benefit and my humiliation....
 
I'm with Jello. I tried once upon a time to write something snazzy like this, it turned out sounding like something a first grader wrote. I'll stick to the reading part!

Snazzy work Dawn, it spoke to me. I really enjoyed this one. :D
 
I like the word snazzy....
 
I love how Dawn always posts 'anonymous' posts.... even though we know it's her... and EVEN though they're on her OWN blog! *claps* you're crazy




And by the way... .I'm hungry...
 
I was crazy once...don't worry Dawn I can coach you through this...*holds out hand*...ok...secretly I am still crazy...I just try to look normal but I do a pretty good job of it I think!!!
 
That's right people, stand back. Sasha's a CRAAAZZZZYYYY woman! You don't want to be near her when she snaps! And, whatever you do, DO NOT GIVE HER TIM HORTONS!!!

:P
 
Hey Sasha...want to go for timmi hoes? lol Derek... really, its just u and Josh who are the crazies here! lol Sasha and i *takes Sasha's outstreatched hand* are NORMAL OK! lol good...i am glad we cleared that up!

WHO WANTS ICE CREAM?
 
Hey...I'm the one with the Psych degree...I get to be the one that tells who is and isnt crazy...and me and Dawn are as normal as normal can be...and Dawn with her nursing can back me up with that...

Hey Dawn I think if you go to my old house....you know the one with the pillar and llama shed *tear*.. the ice cream that you brought us should still be in the freezer...unless Connie ate it all..like she did the cookies..I'm tellin you that girl ate everything in sight...lets hope she doesn't eat me...we will be sharing a room next yr I will be the 1st and last thing she sees every day...EEK!!!!
 
I object! I did not eat everything. I didn't eat the WHOLE box of president cookies. And I didn't eat....... your face!!!

On the topic of crazy, I think you are all crazy! Muah ha ha ha. But if I had to take a side, I take Dawn and Sasha's. Just my thoughts....
 
wow. power-freaking-ful.
 
Connie, why are you afraid of showing your REAL identity? Are you ashamed? Or are you just too lazy to use your name?
 
cause connie we all know its you
 
I would like to read some new material from you Schmo!
 
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